possibly a poem…
here it goes…
with you i am so prideful, and full of me.
but so and so brings me humbly to my knees.
he brings out the worst, and she the best.
so who am i really?
always changing, never consistent.
never the same, always different.
i’m so sick of living inconsistent.
i want to be real.
i want change for the best, not just the better.
no more faking. (no more faking)
kind today. so harsh tomorrow.
speaking lies, then claiming truth.
leaning, falling, i’m losing balance i never had.
always changing, never consistent.
never the same, always different.
i’m so sick of living inconsistent.
i want to be real.
i want change for the best, not just the better.
no more faking. (no more faking)
to be the same.
to achieve balance.
to reach perfection.
can it happen? can it happen?
“be ye perfect as i am perfect”
“ask and it shall be given unto you”
Lord change me.
make me…
to be real.
to truly believe.
to fully trust.
to consistently change for the best.
Lord this i pray.
’cause i’m
always changing, never consistent.
never the same, always different.
i’m so sick of living inconsistent.
i want to be real.
i want change for the best, not just the better.
no more faking. (no more faking)
August 9th, 2007 at 11:29 am
dude, this is so boss. very well could be a poem. haha. it also sounds like it could end up as a song. might work. anyways, it’s good. i really like this, especially the quotes from the Bible. they really fit.
August 12th, 2007 at 11:48 am
wow this was really great and ya it could be both song and poem!!:) ****** 6 stars for the poem!!!xD
August 14th, 2007 at 12:22 am
dude. wow. give me a moment to soak it in.
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MANN! that one was good! :) i would give it 10 stars :] lols and i agree with everyone above! i wonder who the “she” was referring to? but wow.. it sounds like a professional. lols you should really think of having it turned into a song. perhaps :]
August 14th, 2007 at 6:07 am
it is a proverbial she.
none of the pronouns actually refer to anyone i know.
except for i of course, i know the i.
August 15th, 2007 at 12:23 pm
i put 6 cause usually like for music and other stuff the limit is 6 stars so basicly it would be 10/10 ^^